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Kitty Ai - Caitlyn Esther. by *Aikurisu:iconAikurisu:


©2004-2009 *Aikurisu
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Aye, this is the last of the Kitty Ai series.
Any comments will be much appreciated!

Caitlyn Esther and the fiction Phoenix Requiem are created by me © 2004 Kristopher P. Love. Any of the contents involved may not be used in any way or form without consent.

A maiden's thoughts;

Who was it that told me the world could be shaped with a strong person’s will, or be shunned to live obliviously in? Sometimes I would gaze up to the stars thinking of that man who told me such, as I sit here sharpening the will of my blade many years after with the whetting stone he gave me back then as a mere weight holder of scrolls. Oh how we thought two worlds apart, yet perhaps that’s what he wanted me to think. We were living a lie, yet he just stood there smiling, watching me intently with sincerest hope. ‘We’ll fight back the storm, this I promise,’ he’d gesture, ‘for the glory of your house, your old foes will meet you like waves threatening one of God’s born cliff sides, to crash and be broken. Remember that a wall is something a spirit should be; fortified with many manners to distil and hide any weaknesses inside, for there is never truly an ability to shield ourselves from everything, only to improve grace from obscurity.’

I honestly couldn’t care less back then for the glory of whatnot, as I continued to strike my steel, slowly, with long patient strokes. ‘Your soul should reflect the perfect balance between your spirit and blade, Cat, remember that,’ another of my cherished men would say and, ‘for one whom wishes to wield the sword must first conquer oneself of any distractions in life,’ he would go on telling me. ‘If you can see the reflection in your blade as perfect at the calmest rest at water’s edge, so should your soul be in harmony, for if should the blade be tainted like the soul wielding it, there is no assurance to see either two make past every storm.’ Raz always was one to bring a certain shine in steel...

With that I would sigh, wondering how I ever found my life in a storm of swords and not a calm of scrolls. Two hands offered me different lives yet I took the blade and not the feather. Yet in the end it’s funny how the two men remind me of each other. So as I face another sunset before ruins of mankind’s forever warring, I consider what lays in days unwritten before me. In the end I only have one hope, one prayer. A chance to redeem house Esther, truth one of my friends would want. I owe much to him as I take his breath with my master’s blade, though both men my masters of past and present. One day we’ll all meet again with our troubles left behind. And then we shall see true… my fate.

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:iconraven-dies:
that is some sweet shit. very good job
:iconcklaighe:
hey!

who's the other guy?


i don't believe i've read him from anywhere? ^^;


awwwwwww........ now..... the ranger is so faraway from her life...


she looks so seducing....

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lol, if I told the name of who the other was she spoke about, that would ruin that side of the story, ya? =P

Hmm... anywayz, I don't think Fyren and her were ever meant to be, I am admit to say. You'd have to know the full story behind his character to understand why. Trust me, what legend is in his history is something well distant from any of the other main characters really. That's what makes him so special. XD

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A wise soul holds onto their dreams in a struggle.
A foolish one only dwells on burying them with it.
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Thankyou very much. =)

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A wise soul holds onto their dreams in a struggle.
A foolish one only dwells on burying them with it.
:iconmaddy02:
...Wow

Story: 8/10

Caitlin: 10/10 (11/10 for the hair)

Background: 3/10 I'm sorry, but stock photographs just don't work...the colours are nice and suit the pic but it'd be better had you done it yourself... and there's no way that wall could support itself like that, it should be more open at the top.

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It only shows a partial structure of the wall, Maddy. If only I wasn't limited to size restrictions, (That and I didn't want to make Caitlyn look so small in comparison) I would have built a castle wall, towers, and that hole in itself would be from a catapult's siege. But alas, that would have been going too far over my head. XD

The stock photo is actually a merging of few stock photos to get the blend of colours I wanted to match, yet if I wanted to do the same without such resources, I might have been on this for more than the weeks I put into it already... -_-;; Christmas is coming, and I wanted to move along. ^^

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A wise soul holds onto their dreams in a struggle.
A foolish one only dwells on burying them with it.
:icondarkknightgafgar:
Very well done. So this is the finished product eh? Amazing. I must agree on the background though - the giant circular hole in the stone wall just doesn't look right. Your explanation does settle a few qualms about it though. And the sky is very nice indeed. The little flash of thigh near the bottom is a nice touch of fanservice too. FAVORITES'D
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Wow, I'd have to say this is the best (or at least one of the best) piece you have done yet. I always pictured Cat as more of a carefree and happy person, but she looks so mature in the picture. The whole piece is just stunning, Rain. If I didn't fav this one, I'd be mad.

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Well I think it's a great success from what I managed to salvage from my original, eh? =P

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A wise soul holds onto their dreams in a struggle.
A foolish one only dwells on burying them with it.

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